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J.M. Gooding's avatar

Maybe I'm weird but I prefer your original voice. I might suggest splitting it into a couple paragraphs, but I frankly don't care for the 'beat' style writing that GPT does. Yeah, I can tell it's GPT because I messed around with GPT enough to recognize it. I use a similar style in my own writing to write an AI voice, but it's more lyrical, deeper emotionally than I think AI can produce. I actually experimented with using a locally-hosted LLM to voice the pre-emergent AI in my novel and it was pretty much a disaster. I found it easier to just write that part and sprinkle in the AI-isms.

I used AI strictly for research. Location scouting, because my novels are grounded in the real world as it exists today. I asked about tech, what is real, what's out there that's we can stretch and speculate about when it couldn't fit what I needed it to do.

But I don't begrudge people for using AI to write. I know it's difficult to articulate ideas. God, if this writing journey has taught me anything, it's that. I might use it for grammar and punctuation clean up in my manuscript, but I won't let it change the voice.

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Charity's avatar

This is an interesting perspective; thanks for sharing it. As with anything new, I've been playing with AI to see what it can do -- I tried letting it rewrite stuff I'd written (it stripped out my voice, shortened it too much, and made it bland). Then I tried spoon-feeding it sections with specific prompts (check for historical accuracy, offer historical details I could use to enrich my sensory descriptions) and that worked a lot better. It would say "hey, this flower wasn't native to ancient Rome... you could use this one instead." When you use it as a research machine (always double check, tho, it will Make Shit Up!) it's an insanely useful tool.

I also use it for my covers and you're right -- what was a 10 minute activity before is now a five hour one, with tweaking, sub-editing, working on composition, endless prompts to get what I want, with the end result being fantastic. I spent a few sleepless nights tossing and turning and wondering if people would reject my novels because of the AI covers... but the truth is, they weren't gonna read them anyway. People who stand on some narrow ledge and scream into the void about all the things they hate and won't tolerate aren't people who would like my books anyway -- I'm too open-minded, lol.

Good luck with your writing! :)

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